Please consider a few things when you're raising comments against text content:
We have our own style of writing, so while we will consider the factual
information you provide, we won't always use your suggested wording.
We will use your comments to improve the accuracy of our text, but we
won't always be able to include everything that you suggest, due to
space or our own marketing guidelines. You can get an idea of how
much space we have for each section by looking at the TUI website.
As a general rule, the 'Content' section is used to show an overview
of the best things about the hotel and the surrounding area.
The 'Facilities' section is where we can add more details about each facility.
Please be clear in your comment and provide as much context as possible.
For example, if you ask us to edit or remove a facility, or block of text,
please explain why - is it no longer there/is it temporarily closing down?
Please provide details like any age restrictions, specific months that
facilities are available and whether or not they are chargeable.
Note - we use an * to show if something is chargeable in resort.
Please avoid copying and pasting text from your own website and
raising that as a comment. Rather than attempting to rewrite whole
pieces of text, it is better if you clearly explain what it is
that we need to add, remove or edit.